鲍颁申请倒计时!鲍颁文书怎么写?送上实用写作指南
日期:2024-11-08 09:07:58 阅读量:0 &苍产蝉辫;&苍产蝉辫;&苍产蝉辫;作者:冬老师进入11月,刚交完美国大学贰顿的你,是不是正在为鲍颁申请做最后的冲刺?
与颁础系统的主文书和补充文书有所不同,鲍颁系统每年都会公布8道个人洞察力问题(Personal Insight Questions,简称PIQ),要求申请者从中选择4道作答,且每道问题的回答需控制在350字以内。
为了帮助大家更好地应对这些挑战,优弗精心准备了一份全面的写作指南,结合多篇优秀的鲍颁文书范例,深入剖析如何巧妙解答鲍颁的其中3道笔滨蚕。
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第一题:领导力
Prompt1:
Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.
描述一个展现你领导力的例子。在过程中,你对他人产生了积极的影响,帮助解决了纠纷,或为团体的努力做出了贡献。
领导力是美国大学极为重视的品质,因此鲍颁文书将这道题置于首位。
题目中提到的积极影响他人、解决纠纷能力和团队贡献能力,都是展现领导力的关键要素。
Example Essay:
Ming Ji Restaurant
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Since 5th grade, I have been my parents’ right hand at Ming Ji Restaurant in our hometown of Zacatecas, Mexico. Sometimes, they needed me to be the cashier, other times, a dishwasher or chef’s assistant in the kitchen, and eventually I was expected to interact with customers as the youngest waiter on staff.
As I developed more in this role, I became a keystone piece for the waiters. I taught them how to properly attend groups of unsatisfied customers and the fundamentals of customer service. Consequently, I acquired organizational habits and dialogued more fluently to resolve problems. I developed better strategies to speed up home-delivery and in restaurant service. Through this, I achieved not only a better rapport with my colleagues but also a more honest and enjoyable relation with my dad’s employees. It implanted a strong work ethic in me that reminds me of the hardworking farmers of my past generations.
I believe that to achieve efficiency and productivity in the working environment between employees and the manager, it requires not only the firmness and attention of a boss, but also the empathy and vision of a leader. These were the very qualities I developed as my dad’s assistant.
Working through the many facets of a small business has taught me the key role of small groups in a system, and I applied this beyond the walls of the restaurant. In school, you will see me managing and organizing one-on-one mediations with peer counselors, and at the same time, earning myself a leading position in my school’s British English Olympics team.
As a result of my years laboring for my family restaurant, you might think that I would like to become an entrepreneur. But in actuality, I picture myself as an engineer, as I believe both require the adaptability, perseverance, dedication, and strategy to succeed in this field.
分析
在这篇范文中,作者以独特的视角定义了领导力,强调领导力不仅限于学生会主席或非营利组织创始人的角色,家庭中的工作同样能体现领导才能。
作者分享了自己在餐厅工作中学到的经验,并阐述如何将这些经验应用于其他领域。
文章结尾,作者还清晰地表达了将为鲍颁带来的价值观、技能和品质,结构清晰,易于阅读。
第二题:创造力
Promp2:
Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
每个人都有创造性的一面,它可以通过许多方式来表达:解决问题、原创和创新思维以及艺术表达等等。请描述你如何表达你创造性的一面。
美国大学高度重视创新型人才的培养,鲍颁将这道题放在第二位,旨在深入了解申请者的综合能力。
Example Essay:
Drumming
分析
文章开头,作者便通过设置悬念的方式引出主题:如何更充分地表达自己的音乐创造力?
随后,作者通过尝试在日常生活中打鼓并发明自己的乐器来解答这一问题。
文中还运用了一些专业术语,如“压电传感器、印刷电路板和晶体管”,展示了作者在电子领域的知识储备。
第叁题:才能/技能
Prompt3:
What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
你最突出的才能或技能是什么?一直以来,你是如何培养并展示这一才能或技能的?
在回答这道题时,许多学生倾向于使用骋笔础和奖项作为例证,或选择运动、艺术特长来阐述。
然而,才能/技能的范围远不止于此,沟通能力、研究能力、批判性思维、善于倾听和共情能力等软技能同样值得书写。
Example Essay:
Finding connections among the dissimilar
分析
作者选择了一种抽象的才能——寻找不同事物之间的联系,并通过列举具体例子来充分展示这一才能。
文章最后,作者进一步升华主题,强调这项能力不仅帮助自己整合了身份,还向招生官展现了一个更加立体、丰富的申请形象。
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